Petes Brain |
Work space for writing stories for Literotica |
Was supposed to post this one as Justyna, therefore starting a theme with my stories (sexy names?), but as mentioned previously I have bad grammar etc and it got bumped by Literotica’s auto check and I couldn’t figure out how to repost under the same title.
Any how, this one got rated higher than my first effort (14 people liked it! Woo!). I did this one first person and focused on the teasing build up. I liked it!
The idea came after driving home one night and passing an unbelievably attractive girl heading home from the station. The chivalrous half of me thought; “oh, it’s late perhaps I should give her a lift!”. The randy fucker in me thought; “Damn, imagine if I gave her a lift and we hit it off…….”.
Queue the 70’s porn Jazz music after the click.
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The first story I submitted, for some reason I decided to write it from an odd you/her 2nd person(?) perspective.
I don’t know why and it gets a little clinical and too specific as it goes on.
I also discovered that not only is my spelling totally dependant on this machine correcting me, but my grammar and punctuation is also wank. Thankfully a benefit from writing this little short stories is that I might improve!
In addition I love the name “Iona”, I have no idea if I ever met an Iona I must have heard it on TV I guess, it sound nice and saucy…… Yes I use words like saucy.
If you want to read it click or head over to Literotica, link should be around someplace.
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