Petes Brain

Haven’t written anything in ages!

So to get things moving I wrote a quick and dirty short one.

Have decided to use the same characters from now on, an episodic “adventure” so to speak. As I’m so incapable of writing particularly engaging story lines, this’ll give me the opportunity to have the protagonists interact a bit more.

anyway, story after the bump.

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My first two efforts were very much all about the fuckin’. Mainly this was because of my complete lack of skill in creating believable characters. Because of this I decided to make my third effort include the build up, the flirtation and proposition stage of the dirty story.

Naturally as I’m woefully unequipped for this level of creative writing i’ve hit a block. All the shagging is written, that shits easy!, but the talk and flirtation just seems daft when I write it down.

Preview after the click!

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I’m British, you American folks spell stuff funny.

Annoyingly this machine has UK and US dictionaries and I seem to have somehow set US for somethings and UK for others, so depending on how I post my stories the spell checker goes crazy pointing out all my errors!

Starting to worry that all my US spelling will effect my job work. :/

Was supposed to post this one as Justyna, therefore starting a theme with my stories (sexy names?), but as mentioned previously I have bad grammar etc and it got bumped by Literotica’s auto check and I couldn’t figure out how to repost under the same title.

Any how, this one got rated higher than my first effort (14 people liked it! Woo!). I did this one first person and focused on the teasing build up. I liked it!

The idea came after driving home one night and passing an unbelievably attractive girl heading home from the station. The chivalrous half of me thought; “oh, it’s late perhaps I should give her a lift!”. The randy fucker in me thought; “Damn, imagine if I gave her a lift and we hit it off…….”.

Queue the 70’s porn Jazz music after the click.

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The first story I submitted, for some reason I decided to write it from an odd you/her 2nd person(?) perspective.

I don’t know why and it gets a little clinical and too specific as it goes on.

I also discovered that not only is my spelling totally dependant on this machine correcting me, but my grammar and punctuation is also wank. Thankfully a benefit from writing this little short stories is that I might improve!

In addition I love the name “Iona”, I have no idea if I ever met an Iona I must have heard it on TV I guess, it sound nice and saucy…… Yes I use words like saucy.

If you want to read it click or head over to Literotica, link should be around someplace.

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I started writing submissions for Literotica and decided to start venting associated thoughts on here at the same time.

I guess i’ll stick my submissions here too! Note, I’m bad at creative writing.